RED ISSUES _c2

I was eleven years old when I realised there were three sisters in my class ... they were skinned they had always the pale skin. They were good students, very quiet and really beautiful. That is why many boys stared at them for hours. One day while I was talking with my soulmate, we realised when the sun shines, they don't come when the sun shone, they didn't come... and it was very strange. What about them? What happened (T) with(prep) them? We didn't know it, but we decided we will discover it we will have discovered it. 


It was in the dinning room's school while we were having lunch (I'll help you rephrase this), when I heard a conversation about blood. This conversation

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AN UNEXPECTED BIRTHDAY_c2

Ellie was a normal girl. She used to do what all teenagers usually do. She was in secundary secondary school. That year had been very hard to for her and her family, but specially especially to for her. The death of her grandmother Her grandmother's death changed her life completely, because she was the one of the family the one from the family who had the closest realtion relationship with her. Her grandmother had always been near next to her and she was biggest Ellie's supporter. For this reason, Ellie thought that year her family would make of her birthday a special day and would help her to get over to to be able to smile again. She knew that was a difficult thing because she hadn't smiled since she last had been with her grandmother, but she hoped it because she need needed it. She was really fed up of not enjoying life; she needed a second chance to be happy. 

And after a long time arrived the day the day arrived; her birthday. She had been nervous during the whole week because she didn't know if her expectations would come true that day. It was
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A SUMMER NIGHTMARE_C1

It was a very strange day, It was raining and snowing at he same time and  It was very cold. Also there was a lot of people who was crying and running in the village, and some police officer..(G) tryed (T) to solve this probleme, but It was impossible. While all this (G)  things was (G) hapening out (WW) I was watching from my window's house (G), without understanding what was hapening thear(SP). ..

I really felt vary bad, and so sad to saw (T) what was happening in the village, because the world was changing. A few houres (SP)later I heard someone asking ... help and some food, and when I opened the door I found a lady with two smalls (G) girls. I started to talk with them to know what  (WO)  but suddenly some (G)  police officer interrumped (SP) and shouted at us. I was verry (SP) scared but then  I woke up and I realised that It was only a nightmare.

The best sailing day of my life_C3

I will always remember the day I got up with the right foot. It's difficult to say which is the best day of our lives. This happens because we have so many good memories and we don't want to choose just one of them as we want to remember them all as fantastic days, not only one. What I have decided to write about as the best day is one of these good days that I find special.

It was a cloudy grey day in summer summer day when I got up, and I felt so strange that I decided to lie down again and wait for a few minutes before going to have breakfast. That day I had planned to go sailing, so finally I got up and I went with my friend Nico. We reckoned that the sea was calm enough for us to go out of the harbour and sail to "s'Illa de l'Aire". Later on, when we were on our way there, hundreds of dolphins suddenly appeared all around us and began to jump in and out of the sea. We were really surprised to see so many dolphins and witness such a nice scene. We began to sail faster with them but when we arrived at the island , they disappeared into the sea.

I had never seen such an amazing thing in all my life, so I was thrilled and I realized that I would probably never see it again. It had definitely been the best sailing day of my life!

FORTUNE_C3

I will always remember 1 January 2012. In November, my family and I moved to the house of my grandparents my grandparents' house in sa Mesquida because we are were reforming remodelling/redoing our house. The Advantage that we were of being there was that I would often go fishing with my father but  we only fished caught small fishes fish.

One day before On New Year's Eve, my mother told me to start the year wearing red clothes since that I would give me good luck. I wanted to try it. How AsI didn't have any red clothes, I took a socks of my father pair of socks that belonged to my father. I really believed that I wouldn't have be lucky, but to try I wouldn't lose nothingI wouldn't lose anything if I tried. That day, we rarely woke up early and my father and I went fishing. I fished caught eleven enormous fishes, the biggest ones I had ever fished. I didn't believed couldn't believe it, it was so amazing.

I think that wearing those shocks gave me good lucky. After that event I wear and I will wear those special red shocks every 21 of December.

A NIGHT IN THE MISTERY CHURCH _C1

It was the worst day of their lifes (SP) . Tim and Jack were two boys who liked recording jokes with a camera and then sell it (G) to a producer.
 On a cold winter's night, they went into an old church where lived an elder man whose work (WW)  was to protect it (WO) . Tim and Jack didn't know that. They first walked arround (SP)  the chapel, it was very silent, suddenly Tom went up a bank and he started jumping through the corridors. Jack was recording it. When Tom arrived at the end of the room, he stopped, he was staring a place at something,it was a picture. The boys aproached to that paint(ww) . Jack looked into his pants (ww)  and he caught (ww)  a pen. He started drowing  (sp) a moustache and some freckles. The church was quite (ww) , suddenly there was a noyse, but the guys continued with their work. When he was painting the freckles, he pushed very strong and pressed so hard that he broke the picture. He was terrified, what has (T) he done? 
Then he looked behind the paper and he found a little room. Both entered and they saw a bow, that (G) seemed to be very old, it was pretty, with lots of decorations. When Tom caught (WW)  it, the guard entered into the room, they must(T)  scape(SP). There was a little window. Jack saw it, he jumped and could escape. Tom wasn't so lucky. Three months later Jack has no news from his mate.

Albert Pascual Villalonga

MY OWN STORY_NOT FINISHED

Until 2004 my life was great, I have a lot of friends, the school was going well and all the family had good health, but then my father had to go to Barcelona and my mother too and I stay with a parent. At the begginig I didn't know what was happening, but one day my mother said to me that I have to go to Barcelona too because my father wasn't well and they didn't know how much time it will take the treatment, so I had to leave Menorca, my friend, my school to go to Barcelona. Then they explain to me that my father had leucemia and it was a hard ill so we have to stay there for a time. I went a new school, made new friends and start a new live, 

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THE MILKMAN'S HONESTY _ F

There was a mikman who became wealthy cheating people and  selling a mixture of milk and the river's water which he had to cross with his boat to sell the  to his city buyers. One day he went to collect his earnings in order to buy a new and luxury boat. When he had the earnings with him and was crossing the river, the boat overturned and all of his money was swallowed by the river. The milkman was very sad, but at that time he heard a voice that came from the river: "Don't be  sad, the earnings you have lost are only the dishonest part that you have won".

In conclusion the moral is: be honest and earn money correctly and honestly.

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I remember being layed at the edge of the lake listen music with my radio, a soft and cheering music which  i was in love with it, while the waves surfed slowly and they touched my toe's finger.

The birds were singing and the trees make sound due to the mild wind that blew in that place, but not in a distance time, all this calm and silence was unmaking, the birds leaved  frightening 

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REAL ZOMBIES? MMM... NO

One day I was bored in my room and I've decided to read a book. For my surprise, this book was the most interesting book I've ever read. It tells a very interesting history about two detectives that was investigating a crime. They had found a video of the crime secene and thought the assassin will probably appear on it. And they were right, but the assassin was not exactly a person... They revised the viedo a milion times trying to believe it: the assassin was a zombie! Technical image experts confirmed that the video was not falsificated. A zombie had killed a person. How they were going to catch a zombie? Without any more clues, the detectives decided to return to the crime secene. While they were looking for something that was able to help them, they heard a noise. Suddenly, they saw a zombie runing towards them. Frightened, they took out their guns and the zombie stoped running at the same time that asked if the director had changed the screenplay. The detectives at that time were so confused. In the end, it was just a horror movie, nothing real had hapenned. Result that the director hadn't asked permission to shoot in the park, and the supposed crime was a hoax. 

A MYSTERY IN THE HOSPITAL_ NOT FINISHED

One night, in an abandoned hospital, the guard hear strange sounds in the second floor. In these floor, when the hospital was opened, there was the section of psicology and people with mental problems. The guard, inmediatly call the police and explain that he had hear something in the second floor and he think that there are so  
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Lunes, 16:00. I'm coming to the europort because I carried my parent, this significate that I have got my house in all week. My friends and I had thought that if my parents didn't stay in my house, we will  be beable to get a party in my house. We  talking in the week and when it's a weekend, we will meet to prepare the party.

We
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Last summer, Paul and his friends decided to camp in the beach. They though that it will be a great night, without parents, only friend

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LOST IN THE FOG_ F

It was a grey and rainy day and we had just left the stables on our horses when the first drops began to fall. We didn't care.

We crossed the river and entered the wood which covered the mountain. Everything was green and a little stream run beside us towards the town situated at the foot of the mountain. We gallopped up and up without even seeing anything because of the increasing rain.
And then, the wood was behind us and there was only thick fog around us. I felt like in a story.
We arrived at the top of the mountain. On our way back, we realized that we had gone lost so we just started to ride downhill and found ourselves in a little town some hours later.

It the end, after another hour's riding, three soaked girls entered the stables. Soaked but euphoric. It had been a great adventure.

HE'S EVERYWHERE_F

You'll never believe what I'm going to explain to you. It's hard for me, so I can't imagine how hard it will be for you. But trust me, I'm being honest telling you I'm going to tell you all the truth. You're a privileged person, because I didn't do the same with the judge. I can remember it like it was yesterday although I wish I had forgotten it.

All started when I was fifteen, in the summer of '69. I went to a bar in Glasgow because we couldn't afford a TV at home and I needed to see the final of the Champion's League. It was Celtics against United. 
I went to a bar near home housed in a tiny and dark street. Inside, it was packed of people and very dark and dirty. It wasn't the most comfortable bar in the city at all. By my side there was a bald man all dressed in a big black coat. As soon as the match started, he offered me a cigarette. It was the first time I smoked, and I swear I didn't like it, it was awful! The man was so serious, but I made friends with him inmediately and he bought me such a big amount of drinks that I had to go to the toilet like three or four times.
It was late, the match had finished two hours ago and almost everybody had left. When we thought it was late enough, we left. Just in front of the exit, a man with a knife murdered him and told me exactly these words: 'Don't tell anybody, I'll be watching you'.

And he did, I've seen him every day of my life. I'm completely sure he's insane. I saw him when I went to Morocco in 2003, in my marriage, and I've seen him today in the bakery. I am very scared.

CATS _ NOT FINISHED

The last summer I finished the High School, I was very excited and I wanted to enjoy the most that summer. But however I spent the first two weeks in the sofa doing nothing and enjoying of the free time. But the third week I couldn't sleep more and I went out to the street. There were a women, dressed with exotic clothes and golden jewelery, she was selling magazins about how the animals came to the Earth. I decided to buy one, I thouht that it could be interesting. When I returned to my house I strated reading, 

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A TRAGIC LOVE - C3

On an island in the world, lived John Mathieu, a very special child. John , a very special child, lived  in a normal house with his father Tom, who is was an alcoholic person, and his dog Steven. John hadn't a mother because she had died had been murdered, but the police didn't find had never found the murderer . John didn't  have any friends on  the island because he was a special boy, and he didn't have relantion with his partners of the any relationship with his school mates. 

John is was in love of with a girl who is of in his class but he didn't dare to tell talk with her . One day, John takes a took up the courage and he asked a girl to have a relationship with him. At the that moment the girl and the rest of class started to laugh. John got agree  angry and he says said : "I will take revenge". One night, John is was set to pursue her, and he kidnaped her. John leads led her to an alley and begins began to mistreat her . In finally, John killed the girl.

A DREAM BECOME A NIGHTMARE_c2

A boy named Michael was a very good football player. Since he started playing his favourite sport everyone  saw that he had a special ability for it and he resulted (WW) to be a very good  mate with the other players. He always helped them when some excercise was difficult and he used to play in all the field's positions  . Thats why the coach was very surprised seeing the future that Michael could have. 
Then he started playing  in a grass pitch and another time, he resulted (WW) to be the best player in his team. The new team manager was also surprised with his new player, Michael. He ran all his field thousands ...(WM)  times in a match and all his mates wanted to be like him. The first year playing in the grass, the team played very well and surprised all the viewers  with a lot of goals. Another season, Michael ....

WHAT A DISASTER! _F

As we know fishing is a common activity in Menorca and my father loves going fishing on his little boat

One summer day my father went fishing with a friend . They were throwing the nets near the "Illa de l'Aire" when  they suddenly  saw a boat on the rocks and a man trying to refloat it. They obviously went to the island and helped him, but they couldn't refloat the boat, so they decided to go back to the cove. After a while, when they were almost back, the survivor  asked them if he could go with them the next day, because they had to take out the nets; they accepted and they arranged to meet at half past six the next morning.

They went to the island and they tried to refloat the boat again, but it was empty and the sea was rough, so it was impossible. Once they had taken out the nets, they went back to the cove. The survivor thanked them for everything and my father stood there for a while. After a few minutes a friend of his, who was also in the cove, called him. He was so worried because he had found a crushed boat on the "Illa de l'Aire" and the man wasn't there; he explained that he had phoned the police and while they were talking, some people were looking for that disappeared man underwater. My father couldn't believe it. 



This is not my final text, I rewrote it all in class. I've corrected the mistakes, but I have written the correct text below.

As we know fishing is a common activity in Menorca and my father loves going fishing on his little boat

One summer day my father went fishing with a friend . They were throwing the nets near the "Illa de l'Aire" when  they suddenly  saw a boat on the rocks and a man trying to refloat it. They obviously went to the island and helped him, but they couldn't do anything, because the sea was rough. 

The next day they went to the island, they couldn't do anything, beacuse the boat was empty. They went back to the cove, the survivor thanked them for everything and my father stood with a friend who was worried, beacuse he had found a boat on the Illa de l'Aire and there was nobody there. He explained that he had phoned the police and said that in that time the police was looking for the disappeared man underwater. My father couldn't believe it and they inmeditaly phoned the police and told them the man was saved and sound in his house.

THE LUCKY BOY_ C4?

Once upon a time , there was a boy who was very poor. He was finishing his non compulsory studies. He didn't know what he was going to do next because of his family economic status. He really would like to study physics but he wasn't able to do it.

He wasn't an excelent student but he was regular and good. When the final exams had finished , all thestudents gave a party and he went, he was very drunk . He thought drinking was a way to escape from reality and not think about his miserable future. Suddenly , they heard a police alarm: the neibourhood had called them.

The boy ran as much as he could, he didn't know where to go and he went to the city center and while he was running he saw 20€ on the floor. It was 8a.m in the morning, he didn't know what to do with them and he decided to buy a Christmas lottery ticket. Fortunately, he won a prize and he could pay his studies. He was really lucky.