Bullfighting is the sport of baiting and killing a bull as a public spectacle and also the typical tradition of Spain. But, nowadays, in some places in Spain, bullfighting has been much criticized, because some people think that bullfighting tortures bulls and kills them without consideration. Do you think bullfighting is right or wrong?
In my opinion, bullfighting is totally wrong, because some bullfighters are recognized as artists and I think that a person who kills harmless animals can’t be called an artist . Furthermore, bullfighters say that bullfighting doesn’t abuse bulls, and it’s wrong because they stab bulls with a sword and they bleed so they are abused. In addition, bullfighters say that bullfighting is a tradition, but I think that a tradition which kills animals shouldn't be allowed.
In conclusion, bullfighting is a bad tradition that should be banned because they are killing bulls the animal dies in terrible conditions.
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