I can still recall the holidays I spent in
America when I was young. After working very hard for a long time, I finally
managed to earn enough money to spend a few months in America, which was the
thing I wanted the most since I was a child. Then, I flew alone to New York,
looking forward to seeing new places and meeting interesting people.
When I arrived there, I was impressed by the
enormous dimensions of the city. I walked and walked around the city for a
few days, visiting some of the most important places in the city such as the
Statue of Liberty and the Empire State Building. One day, while I was walking
on the street, I saw a child crying next to a basketball court. He was about 15
years old, black-skinned and very tall. His name was Michael and, when I asked
him why he was crying, he answered me that his basketball shoes had just broken
and that he didn’t have enough money to buy a new pair, so he couldn’t play
anymore. I felt very sorry and I decided
to give him money to get a new pair. He was very happy and he promised to me
that he would reward me some day. From then, we got on very well and started
being good friends, but I had to return to my country, so we had to separate.
It was about 20 years since I last saw Michael.
I had no news from him and I hadn’t seen him for ages, but I knew that he
would always be my friend. Nevertheless, one day, while I was watching a
sports program on television, I saw a report that made me smile: a young
basketball genius called Michael Jordan had just won his first ring as an NBA
champion.
I really like your essay, it's very emotive. When I read 'Micheal' I knew that he was or he would be a basketball famous player before reading the final. I also think that in our world are millions of people with the same or similar history, they knew a person some years ago and altough they haven't seen for ages, they have something in its hearts saying that they always be friends.
ReplyDeleteWell done! I've enjoyed reading your story because it's very exciting and it shows you've worked on it.
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