Spain, at this moment, has a lot of problems. The
country is undergoing tough times /is going through hard times . One of the most important problems though,
according to a large part of the population, is unemployment. So now,
more than five million people haven’t a job.
The problem arrived with the global crisis, which has lasted longer than Spaniards expected. At first, the government sent every day a reassuring message for the population saying that it wasn't a crisis
but a ‘’deceleration’’. People believed it because the Spanish economy wasn't so bad. That was in 2007-2008. Nevertheless, at the same time we saw the situation in USA and also in the rest of Europe, we worried a little
although the president, José Luis Rodriguez Zapatero, kept giving the same
message: ‘’Don’t worry, Spain has a good and strong economy’’. A lot of Spaniards
began to suspect and worry really. The first protests took place. Unemployment, obviously, kept onrising and a lot of families lost their
job. In addition, the government didn’t do anything about it. As a result, the social,
economic and political situation of the country got worse.
With the new government that seemed to improve but, at the
moment, it doesn’t. The president and his party are trying to improve the economy
and they focus more on banks and increased the cutbacks in education, health, justice…
Unemployment continues rising and a lot of Spaniards choose to emigrate to
European countries such as Germany or Sweden.
Jordi Saura Nadal 2n B
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ReplyDeleteI think that your opinion is very good. The Government believes that we are stupid and we don't realize that we are in crisis, they try to deceive us by telling us that everything is fine, even the media are trying to fool us when they give us digits on unemployment false.
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion your point of view is correct because unemployment is the worst problem which Spain has because people, who haven't a job, can't buy anything. Consequently, they will be more poor.
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