In my
opinion, people have to be very sure of what they are doing when they get a
tattoo, especially when they do it in a place which is usually seen by others,
such as the arms and even the legs.
Firstly,
we have to be very sure of what you are tattooing because something that really
likes you now, may not like you in twenty years. That’s why you should be
mature enough to decide to get a tattoo because this thing will be with you the
rest of your life, so it will become a part of yourself.
In
addition, people usually judge others by their physical appearance, including
tattoos. Depending on the thing that you want to tattoo, you can show an
ideology which people wouldn’t know of you without seeing the tattoo. That's
why it is recommendable not to tattoo some sort of images which can be related
to a political opinion or something like that.
To
sum up, you must be very careful with what you are tattooing, especially if you
do it in a visible part your body because other people could make a wrong
opinion of you, which can have consequences both in your personal and
professional life.
GOOD JOB.
ReplyDeleteOnly a few things:
- Instead of "be very sure" you could have said "be really sure" or "know for sure".
- Notice in the second paragraph you start with WE and then you change the subject (YOU).
- Something doesn't like you. You like something
- Instead of "make a wrong opinion" I would say get / have a wrong idea
That's a good essay and you have written this with another viewpoint, how you wrote, you might be sure of tattooing yourself but you can remove your tattoo too if you don't liked but, your paying for the same thing two times, so in my opinion I would not tattoo myself.
ReplyDeleteWow Borja! You explain your ideas very clear, I like your essay. I agree with you at almost everything: It's clear that people must be conscious, because getting a tattoo is a very important change. But we cannot stop getting it only because some people don't like it, we must be ourselves.
ReplyDeleteBorja, I have the same point of view .It's difficult make this decision, but a tatto can also make you remember good things or important people. Good essay!
ReplyDeleteWell done! Personally, I think most people who have a tattoo, at a certain moment of their lives, they will regret having done it. Because of this, I believe that it's a good idea to get a tattoo in a part of your body where almost nobody can see it.
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