A lot of youngs simply for be more popular has a tatoo eventhought ... is very painful.
Personally, I am not in favor of people having a tattoo. I have differents reasons why I don't think it would be a good idea to have a tattoo, especially when you are young.Firstly, I think that having a tattoo is very unhealthy for the body and it's so inecessary to cause pain to yourself. Furthermore, the worst problem of having a tattoo is to find a job, because a lot of companies do not allow that their employers have visible tattoos.
In conclussion, I think that a visible tattoo is very relevant to work in a job, especually if the work consist in having direct contact with the customers.As a result, it's better not to have any tattoo.
A few comments to help you correct your essay:
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- Adjectives without plural
- gente joven: young people
- para: to/ in order to
- allow somebody to do sth
- consist of
- employer / employee
- work in a job is redundant, just say to work
I agree with you that tattoos are a fashion accessory it difficult when looking for work because there are a lot of people that think that in jobs it's not suitable wear a tattoo and therefore it prohibits.
ReplyDeleteI agree with your reasons of not having a tattoo, which is harmful and damages our body in a long run but I agree with people who wears a tattoo, especially an small tattoo, if it has a sense in their life. In that case, it's true that it's an impediment to find a job if it's visible.
ReplyDeleteHey Maria! I'm agree with you. The tatto is for ever and is a madness. You can start to think about what will be your future job wit ha visible tatto because there aren't many.
ReplyDeleteI liked a lot your essay Maria! I absolutely agree with you! I think that I'll never have got a tattoo. I respect people that have tattoos, but I have never liked them...
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