In the last few years bullfighting has become more and more controversial. But is bullfighting right or wrong? Here are some ideas that make me believe that bullfighting must not be banned.
Firstly, bullfighting is a very important tradition in Spain, and it is a very popular one too, if we ban bullfighting we will lose our culture, every country has it's different traditions and they are all slowly losing them. Secondly, the bulls that participate in this tradition are very aggressive animals and they protect themselves, so the bullfighters are in a very dangerous position when they fight, because they have the same chances of getting hurt, so it's a fair fight.
To sum up, bullfighting is the symbol of the culture of Spain and, even though I don't watch it, it shouldn't be banned because of its popularity.
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