Bullfighting is a traditional Spanish spectacle in which people enjoy seeing how the bullfighter kills a bull. Bullfighting is legal in different countries, not only in Spain but also in Mexico, Peru, Colombia and in southern France.
Supporters of bullfighting think that it is an important tradition which has been part of the Spanish history and part of the art in general. But is it really important if we keep this tradition?
Nowadays we can not enjoy with this kind of games. We aren't at the time of the Romans, when the gladiators fought with lions or with other beasts.
If currently we protect animals that are in danger because of their hunt, I think that we must protect animals that die only to entertain us with their horrible death. In my opinion bullfighting is wrong, because it is a cruel and bloody tradition, so I think that it has to dissapear.
The structure of your essay is not right! Most of the things you say in the third paragraph should be in the second. I remind you the third is the conclusion.
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