16 January 2013


More and more, there are a lot of people who need to go shopping like an addiction, an illness. In my view, there are two reasons that can explain this fact:
Firstly, I think that the/-- advertising has an important repercussion on this fact with their slogans. They show to/ tell people / make people believe that their products are the newest and the coolest so everybody wants to have that garment/ them. They need to have it, to show to world that they are the coolest, the most modern. Without that/ those objects, they feel empty, depressive, like if they are missing something / something is missing in their lives. They rely on _ shopping like _ alcoholics rely on_alcohol.
Secondly, most of the people who go shopping do it to hide something that they miss, people who are stricken for have been stricken by something. They try to solve it with better clothes, modern bags or new shoes, but this satisfaction, only rest for a short period of time.
To sum up, I think that trying tosolve your problems with shopping, alcohol or something like that is not the solution, so we need to help the/--- people to stop doing this/ these things.

Júlia Fàbregues Pons. 2A BTX

2 comments:

  1. It is a good opinion about this idea and I totally agree with you. There are people that need help because they are addicted, but they really don't know, they aren't conscious about this problems.

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  2. Your essay are good but in my opinion, not all people buy, do it because they absence something

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