Now a days, because off the global crisis, shopping
still being (T) a compulsive act for a lot of people, and why shopping could be (WO) an
addiction?
Some people are use (T) to shop (T) when ... are depressed
or nervous, after a time, they need to buy something every time they are
depressed or nervous. This behavior is considered an addiction, because they
need to shop and they feel better after do (T) it. These types (G) of people need help
from psychologists or doctors. But they are a little group of people. Other people
are affected by ... media, which shows him (G) lot of stupid products and finally
people buy unnecessary things. Besides these (WW), the sales are the principal (WW) cause
of shopping, because when we see a sale (WW), we think that it is a bargain and buy
it. Furthermore if the sales are on (prep) Christmas, the purchases are bigger. Some
people, after buy(Y) something, feel bad and worse before buy(T) it, because they
regret of buy (T) without ...reason.
I think that some people need help to overcome their
addiction, but shopping isn’t always an addiction, when we buy something without
reason, it could be because of propaganda. In my opinion, we shouldn’t pay
attention to publicity, because this want to we(G) buy their products.
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ReplyDeleteI like it! I agree with your point of view because I think that propaganda is one of the most important things that make people buy more and more. Another thing are the sales and I agree too.
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