26 April 2012

Why do you think people like going to the gym? What about you?

Nowadays a lot of people go to the gym to be fit. People are more and more concerned about their appearance, for this reason they like going to the gym.

A lot of people go to the gym all year because they like to make a good impression but there are people who only go for a few months before summer because they want to be thin to go to the beach. Fitness is very important and good, however, the gym can become an obsession. What's more, nowadays people are too concerned about appearance and often they forget that people are more than appearance. Personally, I prefer to do sports outside any gym like badminton or tennis.

To sum up, a lot of people like going to the gym because they like to make a good impression but they should do it slowly. Doing sport is very good for our health but it shouldn't become an obsession.

1 comment:

  1. I've corrected a few more mistakes. Read the essay and erase the words in red.

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