Nowadays gyms are more important than before, because maybe currently appearance is important when you look for a job or meet people and you want to be pretty and go to gym to get fit.
In my opinion, the gym is useful when you need to get fit, moreover if it rains, you can do some exercises without getting wet. In addition, you can get fit in all parts of your body with its machines and some elements . Furthermore, a lot of people are obsessed with their body and take some pills and others drugs to look stronger than others.
In conclusion,the gym is good when you need to get fit, but it can be bad / it can have a negative effect when you are obsessed with your body and you take pills to look pretty.
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