Bullfighting is an event where a person, called "matador" in Spanish, kills a bull cruelly, with a lot of people seeing it. This event is a feature of Spanish culture.
Some people defend bullfighting saying that was and is a tradition of our country, and because of that we should preserve it. Another argument for bullfighting could be that everybody is free to do and like whatever they want, respecting, of course, the Human Rights.
But there are a lot of people in Spain that are against bullfighting saying that it's a cruelty act against the animal rights. These people think that it's not funny to kill an animal, and also show it to tourists as a Spanish symbol.
It's scientifically proved that animals have no feelings, and because of that I think that we shouldn't ban an important tradition for many people in Andalusia and other parts of Spain. Maybe we should concentrate on whether what they do and the traditions they have are ethical or not.
Improving, but remember "people" is plural and that you always need a subject. I've suggested a few changes in brackets. Correct the mistakes and underline the changes.
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