Y, I think that you made a great text, your arguments are good and you explain both points of view very well. You should have given your own opinion, but if you don't have none it doesn't matter. I liked your essay a lot, I give you a 9,5. :D
Great job Yannik, you are right it must be very difficult to decide in a situation like that, but you are lucky, you are a man and you will never have to decide!!
Well, I think the decision should be took by both the father and the mother, even though, of course, is the woman who's pregnant. It's not an easy choice, so in my opinion your partner's support should be helpful. I may have to decide, but I hope not!
I agree with you Yannick, this decision is decision is very important and difficult to decide. But, as Lotti said it, you are lucky to be a man. Therefore, a concern less.
Well, you're right that a man must also have this concern for their children, but a man will never suffer what a woman. And I said that you're lucky because you don't have to abort and you also don't have a period.
I think you've done a great job. You've linked your arguments with connectors, giving more cohesion and unity to the text. Moreover, in the third paragraph you have used counter arguments instead of arguments that have nothing to do with the ones in the second paragraph. I miss your opinion.
Thanks, but my opinion can't be only yes or no, it's not so simple. We could spend hours talking about whether it's right or not without arriving to an agreement. One thing which's certain is that we should avoid as possible this problem: with precautions, like contraceptives, we won't have to worry about this dilemma.
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Y, I think that you made a great text, your arguments are good and you explain both points of view very well. You should have given your own opinion, but if you don't have none it doesn't matter. I liked your essay a lot, I give you a 9,5. :D
ReplyDeleteA, I have an opinion: it's not exactly for but it's neither against. Any situation should be examined properly to decide what to do.
DeleteGreat job Yannik, you are right it must be very difficult to decide in a situation like that, but you are lucky, you are a man and you will never have to decide!!
ReplyDeleteWell, I think the decision should be took by both the father and the mother, even though, of course, is the woman who's pregnant. It's not an easy choice, so in my opinion your partner's support should be helpful. I may have to decide, but I hope not!
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ReplyDeleteI agree with you Yannick, this decision is decision is very important and difficult to decide. But, as Lotti said it, you are lucky to be a man. Therefore, a concern less.
ReplyDeleteWhy can't be men concerned about abortion? Can't we concern about our sons and daughters? I don't understand why you say I'm lucky!
DeleteWell, you're right that a man must also have this concern for their children, but a man will never suffer what a woman. And I said that you're lucky because you don't have to abort and you also don't have a period.
DeleteI think you've done a great job. You've linked your arguments with connectors, giving more cohesion and unity to the text. Moreover, in the third paragraph you have used counter arguments instead of arguments that have nothing to do with the ones in the second paragraph. I miss your opinion.
ReplyDeleteI mean that the opinion you've given to amanda is too neutral.
DeleteThanks, but my opinion can't be only yes or no, it's not so simple. We could spend hours talking about whether it's right or not without arriving to an agreement. One thing which's certain is that we should avoid as possible this problem: with precautions, like contraceptives, we won't have to worry about this dilemma.
DeleteWe're talking about opinions, not agreements, do not change the topic. Anyhow, we could let it here.
DeleteWe're starting to talk like politicians xD This is a bit weird xD
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