Nowadays, there are lots of new mental
diseases such as bulimia, and they are caused by the importance some
people give to their physical appearance and their weigh. The worst
thing in relation with this is that a lot of people need long
treatments to get well, otherwise they can die.
Television has got an important effect
on people's thoughts and ideas because in every single advertisement
you see, there are very good-looking people, slim and gorgeous. This
kind of ads can make people think they are too fat or ugly. If people
think they need to bee pretty and skinny to be successful in life,
they (specially women) will buy all kind of make up and have
operations so as to have a beautiful figure. Although using a bit of
make up is not so bad, thinking that without it nobody would like
them is very sad and wrong.
In my opinion, nobody needs to be
beautiful to be loved or have a happy life. Moreover, from my point
of view, the most important thing about a person is his or her
personality, and that's what will enable anybody to have a good life.
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