First year students should stay in university halls rather than share a flat._C1

This topic, in my opinion, is one of the most interestings respect the others. There are a lot of student... who prefer to share a flat, however ther are others students who prefer a university hall. This two options are not the only, but I am going to talk exclusively about this two options.


On the one hand, I think that share a flat is a good idea to start an indepenent life. When a student lives sharing a flat, he is more responsible, however ... comes a day that tasks aren’t done. Sharing a flat is good to be respected and respect the others, too. Now, I have spoken about sharing a flat but in my opinion I think that staying in ... university hall is better than sharing a flat, because students are more controlled. In spite of they are more controlled, they are in the same time more responsible, so in my point of view these two options are good.


On the other hand, there are some inconvenients. One of them is that students who share a flat go on party frequently, consequently they don’t study all they need, therefore they have low marks. About living in university halls, I know that is the best option. It is more expensive than sharing a flat, but also it is easier, so students don’t become independent.
In conclusion, students should be more concentrated, but I prefer to share a flat, i think that all students grow up as people, however the first year students should stay in university halls, because they not be used to live alone.

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