Terribly,
this addiction is a major expense for the person. No one becomes addicted to
shopping at any moment: firstly the person must have some money; secondly, publicity
through television, radio and billboards shows the right products, and finally this
person feels that he or she has to buy it. For this reason people have things
in house that it doesn't need and/ or it unused.
Finally, I
think that society is based on a compulsive consumerism that makes people spend much
without conscience, and with this, spending unnecessary resources.
Cristina Sánchez Berzosa
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