Firstly, unemployment has become a national problem. Every day we can see on television people that lose their house after having lost their jobs.
Another reason is that, in a short time, you move from being employed to being unemployed.
For example, a family who lives well thanks to the salary of the father, if he loses
the job, the family will suddenly become poor. Finally, unemployment is a
big problem, because an unemployed person spends less money than when this person has a job, therefore he will buy less things and consequently more people will become unemployed.
In
conclusion, I think that unemployment is the biggest problem nowadays in Spain
and I hope that in the next years many unemployed people will be able to find work.
Javi Melia -C
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ReplyDeleteI agree with you That the unemployment is the biggest problem in Spain nowadays. We are going through a very difficult situation as the crisis in which it's difficult to keep your job.
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